Naruto Crushed Dreams
Welcome to Naruto Crushing Dreams. This rpg is a time skip nearly 200 years into the future after naruto and sasuke. We were born to rise or we were born to fall. Inorder for you to know that you must go on in life on this rpg.

Naruto Crushed Dreams

Our heroes have fallen and so have the villians. We are the new era and as the new era will must bring peace to this world, but as for some all you want to do is see the world suffer. You will either follow in the path of darkness or the path of light.
 
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PostSubject: Doragon Wip   Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:26 pm

Name:Doragon Aruji
Gender:Male
Age:22
Village:Village Hidden in the Scales(abandoned)/Leaf Village
Catch Phrase:I shall avenge you my friends,Anything worth having isnt easily gained
Alliance:Good

Personality:Doragon is a quiet guy who plans his strategies.Although he doesnt seem
like it,Doragon is always thinking of a plan for battles and for life.Doragon likes to battle but you may not see it in him.Once he decides to open up and be friendly you can see that his true colors.Doragon cares about his friends and when his is hokage his allies and people.
Likes:battles,strategy,his friends and his allies
Dislikes:most of the akatsuki,evil people,enemies and people who think there the strongest ever

Looks:http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://0bad0.webs.com/photos/anime-guys/sword.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-town/g-o-a/t.62215597/&usg=__5TxjOfJNMT_PZjjRT4bKmQRul8s=&h=554&w=480&sz=31&hl=en&start=370&tbnid=K7jahrF-g-nCqM:&tbnh=119&tbnw=115&prev=/images%3Fq%3Danime%2Bguys%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dfirefox%26sa%3DN%26rls%3Dcom.yahoo:en-US:official%26biw%3D1024%26bih%3D549%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C9527&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=425&vpy=160&dur=1573&hovh=133&hovw=115&tx=87&ty=92&ei=JQRnTK3dBo7EsAPWqP3RDQ&oei=xQNnTJ_zDZL2swOCj-jmBQ&esq=28&page=23&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:2,s:370&biw=1024&bih=549(a bit like that only taller and older)

Description: Doragon is 6 feet 5 inches and weighs 170 pounds.he has blonde hair and brown eyes.Doragon has white skin and a white shirt.He also has brown pants and gloves.

Doragon wears converse or other shoes.he also has a black hilt for his sword and a katana.

Hair color:brown
Skin color:white
Eye color:brown

Ninja information
Rank:chunin
Main:Fire


Name:Aruji Clan
Kekkei Genkai:(Ryugan)
Clan History:The founder was Gango Aruji.Gango knew the creator of the Uchiha and Hyuga and Rinnegan.they were friends and sparred everyday.Gango only thought the ryugan was used for elements and controlling them but later on he realized that he could also control metal with enough chakra use.

Gango later discovered during a sparring match that the sharigan'genjutsu isnt as strong if the ryugan was on.That helped them realize that they had an advantage with the Uchiha.Instead of telling the Uchiha they kept it a secret incase the Uchiha clan would betray them

Next day Gango was sparring with the Hyuga founder but when he used byakugan gango used ryugan and then his byakugan was blurry so they didnt see all the chakra points well.No one one except Gango knew why.

The 3rd day Gango was sparring with Rinnegan Creator.When he used his Rinnegan and controlled his guys,Gango used ryugan looked in his eyes and the bodies were harder to control with the rinnegan.Like byakugan and sharigan no one knew why this happened except Gango

Eventually the clans parted and the aruji clan grew.They made there own country called the Village hidden in the scales.The aruji clan rarely left this country and if they did it was for missions or alerts.One day many of the countries decided to invade the country together and take it but when they did they the arujis were ready and the battle began many people died in this battle 100's of people but the aruji clan was gone except for the last survivor on a mission,his name is Doragon.Doragon fled to the leaf village(they didnt attack the clan)and stayed there.After all that had happened the countries couldnt decide on who should expand to a bigger amount of country so they left it hidden and no one but the people at the war knew what had happened

Clan Symbol:A Dragon

Kekai Genkai:(no pic)it can control all elements and with enough chakra control metal but it takes a huge amount of chakra


BackGround
Doragon was born in the village hidden in the Scales,a village that consits of the Aruji clan only.He trained and was a chunin at 15 then he was a jonin at 15 and for 7 years he was training to be hokage his best friends were Ryuna(girl)and Garnu(boy).Their teacher was Harnuo(woman)and she trained all 3 of them well.

When Doragon was in the chunin exams,he had to fight Garnu it was about to be a tie till he unlocked his Ryogan and beat Garnu.The hokage decided to make only Garnu,Ryuna and Doragon chunin.They did missions together and Doragon was the leader of their squad,they did B rank missions from the start then did A ranks.

When he was a jonin he taught 3 kids who later became chunin,Garnu taught his squad also and Ryuna also.After there missions were done and it was night they would always go out and eat and drink at different resturants.Doragon had S rank missions alot and always completed them with ease and skill.

Doragon was about to be hokage of his village but when he was doing his last mission with his students as a jonin.The Mission was to confront a deadly criminal gang and take their leader to the hokage to get answers about the gang crimes.When he got back he realized his village was attacked and burned down,when he returned,there were no survivors except himself.He traveled around and camped alot.After about a month of camping,he joined the leaf.He was new so he started out as a genin and kept training to have the same status as in the Scale Village.

Then after working hard,the chunin exams started.Doragon and the others in his squad competed.They got through the test ok and the forest of death decently.Then came the 3rd round and his teammates lost eventually,1st on the 1st round 2nd on the 2nd round.Then it was doragon and some guy from the mist.He used the famous hidden mist jutsu and sliced doragon a couple times,doragon was weak then used ryugan.Out of pure luck he saw the sword,donated almost all chakra to ryugan,and made the blade turn shaped into a snake and bit his neck,but he didnt use enough and was still impaled but saw that coming,but still he kept the jutsu going.He kept the blade that way to stop him from bleeding out.After it was over the hokage chose doragon to be a chunin.


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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:45 am

just make History a bit longer should do
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:23 pm

i added a bit more details to the mission and a few more words and fixed a few things
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:17 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:26 pm

Lower age, and remove the statement about previously being in the Akatsuki. The way the Plotline is that they all died, which means your character would be dead. And you have to be 10 - 18 to be a genin, make it reasonable with the Doujutsu you have. Try for Jounin or Chunnin if you don't wanna change the age.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:14 am

fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:51 am

Still needs fixing.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:46 pm

in?
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:49 pm

I said not 27 year old genin.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:00 pm

i added the chunin paragraph
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:03 pm

Okay, seriously, if your guy is 27 in the first paragraph he has no reason to be in another Chunnin Exams.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:10 pm

k i made the age oh when he was a jonin into 15 and made him 22 now
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:22 pm

Please change your rank to Chunnin.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:49 pm

there
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:50 pm

good enough. APPROVED UNLESS STATED OTHERWISE.
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PostSubject: Re: Doragon Wip   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:54 pm

Very Happy thanks now to start my rp eventually
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